The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line graph demonstrates the
number
of merchandise carried by four separate forms of transport during the period from 1974 to 2002.
It is clear that
transporting
goods
by route was the most popular method during the researched period. The
number
of
goods
delivered by 3 modes increased, except for
rail
, which fluctuated. In 1974, about 17,000,000
tonnes
of property were conveyed by road, which was the highest, compared to only 5,000,000
tonnes
delivered by pipeline. The
number
of
goods
sent by water and
rail
was nearly equal, which stood at 40,000,000
tonnes
. Within the next 28 years, equipment transported by road increased remarkably and reached a high of 95,000,000
tonnes
in 2002. Pipelines became more popular its quantity of
goods
also
witnessed a rise from 1974 to 1994 and
then
remain stable at 20,000,000
tonnes
until 2002. Despite the Stability in the
number
of deaths conveyed by water and
Rail
in the first four years, the figure for that by water grew considerably and ended up at 65,000,000
tonnes
in 2002.
By contrast
,
goods
sent by
Rail
returned to the initial point, at 40,000,000
tonnes
in 2002 after a fluctuation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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