The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows the correlation between the
number
of
employees
, both male and female, and the
number
of
factories
in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
Overall
, in fifty years the
number
of
employees
decreased eightfold,
whereas
the
number
of
factories
almost tripled. In 1851,
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the
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ratio between male and female
employees
was 3 to 2, with 287 and 190
thousand
employees
respectively.
Nevertheless
, the situation completely changed ten years later, when the
number
of men decreased more than by half,
while
women's
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the women's
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group lost only 30
thousand
. Another big leap happened in 1871
,
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when the
number
of workers decreased by 50 and 100
thousand
in the male and female groups
accordingly
. The pattern is the same for the rest time frames, leaving only around 30
thousand
people in both genders equally
at the end
.
However
, the situation is not the same for the
number
of
factories
. A big bounce happened between 1861 and 1871, resulting in three times more
factories
.
While
the next decade shows a
further
increase, adding a hundred more
factories
, the next 10 years after illustrate that the
number
before and
after
this
leap is almost the same. At the start of the next century, England and Wales had exactly six hundred plants.
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