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Because of modern technology it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills but other believe that handwriting is still an important skills. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#technology #people #skills
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It has always been argued by nowadays, digitalisation is proliferating continuously, so learning handwriting
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 opponents believe that it is an important skill. I favour the former view;
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 essay shall shed light upon both viewpoints in the subsequent paragraphs. On the one hand, these days it is no longer required to master handwriting
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 because
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 modern technology everything which was to be written by hand is replaced by writing and the majority of universities and organisations
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 computers to make notes and print information. The students give exams on computers where they have to type
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 and it puts an adverse impact on people's writing
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, a survey conducted by Harward University revealed that 55% of exams
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 time waste which they spent past time
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 handwriting
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 the above-mentioned, I favour the same.
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, learning to handwrite is essential. Even though how much technology is advanced, it will not eliminate
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handwriting
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 as with the aid of
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handwriting
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, they would have the opportunity to experiment with writing and it will enhance their creative
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, an article published by The Tribune newspaper showed that almost 75% of human beings have more imagination because they spend most of their time making art and stories with their handwriting.
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 technology changes the skill of writing, handwriting broadens people's horizons.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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