#task2: Many animal species are becoming extinct as a result of human activities. What are the causes and possible solutions to this problem?
As a result
of human ,activities many animals are closer to extinction. The forthcoming essay will discuss the factors and possible solutions to Linking Words
this
situation.
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To begin
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this
situation has several reasons. Linking Words
Firstly
, the human race is experiencing a boom in population all over the world, Linking Words
thus
leading to the expansion and construction of new cities that take place in animal habitats . Linking Words
Secondly
, it is industrial development . Many power plants are built and to accumulate them fossil fuels are needed. Linking Words
As a result
of using them emissions to places Linking Words
such
as lakes , rivers or oceans Linking Words
along with
air pollutants namely carbon dioxide take place . Linking Words
For example
, New York. Before New ,York there Linking Words
have been
forests and a variety of animals, but with the Wrong verb form
were
industrial revolution
, all was gone .
To prevent wildlife creatures from extinction numerous measures should be taken . To illustrate , Correct your spelling
Industrial Revolution
it is clear that
the expansion of the cities can not be stopped , Linking Words
however
, to prevent the loss of habitats all or the vast majority of these points Linking Words
along with
should be saved by building national parks as a matter of course Yellowstone in America . Another solution is replacing old resources and placing them in new ones . Linking Words
For instance
, nuclear, sun , hydro or wind power sources that have no pollutants after them . Linking Words
As a consequence
, vulnerable places for animals will be saved
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To sum up
, wildlife is under big threat because of the human race and many measures Linking Words
in particular
utilising new energy sources should be taken.Linking Words
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task response
The essay provides a partial response to the task question, but lacks depth and coherence in presenting the causes and solutions to the problem of animal extinction related to human activities. In the future, ensure to fully address all aspects of the task and provide a more comprehensive analysis and exploration of the issues.
coherence and cohesion
The essay demonstrates basic coherence and cohesion, but there are clear deficiencies in the logical structure and development of ideas. More attention should be given to the organization of information, including the use of appropriate linking devices and the development of a clear introduction and conclusion.
Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...