The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the average Australian
water
usage in Sydney, Perth, Adelaide, Brisbane, Melbourne, and Canberra
. Meanwhile, the pie chart portrays the distribution
of Australian water
utilization for agriculture, mining, household, water
supply, sewage, drainage, manufacturing, electricity and gas supply, and other industries in 2014.
Overall
, the highest average consumption was witnessed by Perth, and the lowest is in Canberra
. Moreover
, the biggest distribution
in 2014 was for agriculture, and the lowest was for mining.
To begin
with, Perth experienced the highest consumption at 300 kilolitres
last
year. Meanwhile, Canberra
had the lowest amount, around 150 kilolitres
. Furthermore
, Brisbane used 250 kilolitres
, Adelaide around 240, followed by Sydney at 200, and Canberra
at approximately 150 kilolitres
.
In addition
, the highest water
distribution
in Australia was Agriculture at 67%, and mining got less water
at 2%. Australian families get 9% of the distribution
. In addition
, The distribution
of Water
supply, sewage, and drainage at 7%, the number same as electricity and gas supply. Finally
, 5% of the distribution
was for manufacturing and other industries.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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