The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart depicts the amount of
population
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in some particular countries in two different years in the past and the expectation for 2050. By and large, there is
a
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one
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country that had the highest percentage of the world
population
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while
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the other had the lowest. In 2050 and 2002, China was the country with the highest
population
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(23% and 20%), followed by India which reached 15% in 1950 and increased to approximately 17% in 2002. In the third position of the past
population
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, there was the USA with 7%(1950) and 5%(2002). The bar for Japan was always the lowest with the
population
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with a percentage under 5% in the two past years. In the future (2050), people in India (18%) expected will more than that in China (15%). Meanwhile, the USA is predicted will maintain the previous number in the future.
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, the bar from Japan keeps decreasing and will reach almost 1% in 2050.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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