Cycling is a healthier and more environmentally friendly form of transport. Nevertheless, cycling is getting less popular. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to make cycling more popular?

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become one of

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things in our life. They can bring us or things from one place to another place. There are various vehicles

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as planes, cars, ships, motorcycles, and bicycles. Unfortunately, some transportations use

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become one of the causes of global warming

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produce

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air

pollutions

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can be the

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about

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warming issue, they have more benefits for our bodies and surroundings. But today,

less

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people

do cycling and

this

essay will explain why

this

happened and the solutions

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it. The major reason is

because

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there are only

few

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of

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friendly

cyclist

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especially in big cities.

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government

already created tracks for

cyclist

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cyclists

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but in traffic jams, many

peole

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people

who drive

motorcycle

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use those tracks.

People

need to realize that

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track

was made for

cyclist

and

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strict policy has to be

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for drivers using

cyclist

track

, same policy if drivers

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busway

track

. There should be

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police who patrol those tracks and give warning

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or

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to

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the driver

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driver

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who

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againts

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against

the rule.

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, many buildings

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provide parking space for bicycles. It made

cyclist

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cyclists

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worried about their bike. They don't know where they should put their bike, some

people

even bring their bike to their room or put it in the warehouse of that building to make it secure. To handle

this

,

people

should collaborate with building management and

government

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.

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can make a regulation for

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building

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to provide it.

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we should socialize the benefits of using

bicycle

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. In conclusion,

causes

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of less popular

of

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cycling need to be done not only by

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the government

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,

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but

also

by society.