The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates changes in the layout of a library between 20 years ago and at present.

Overall

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it is clear that

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the library has undergone a significant renovation, providing more options for the public. In the middle area, tables and chairs opposite the entrance in the south have been removed. The CDs, videos,

computer

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and computer

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games in the northwest have been changed into sofas which are used for storytelling events and expanded for the appearance of children’s fiction

books

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. The computer room is situated on the bottom left corner which was

initially

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the reading room’s location. There is

also

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a new area with all reference

books

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replacing adult fiction

books

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in the mid-west of the library. The adult fiction

books

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are currently relocated to the mid-east side which

also

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has information desks and self-service machines

while

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there are no longer adult non-fiction

books

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there. On the 2 eastern corners, the children’s

books

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in the north have been converted into a lecture room and the enquiry deck in the other one is now a café.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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4 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
public library
layout
reading area
computer station
multimedia section
children's area
reference section
study cubicles
shelving units
digital media
technological advancements
user behavior
accessibility
traffic flow
modernization
community needs
conversion
allocation
removal

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