The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates changes in the layout of a library between 20 years ago and at present.
Overall
, it is clear that
the library has undergone a significant renovation, providing more options for the public.
In the middle area, tables and chairs opposite the entrance in the south have been removed. The CDs, videos, computer
games in the northwest have been changed into sofas which are used for storytelling events and expanded for the appearance of children’s fiction Correct word choice
and computer
books
. The computer room is situated on the bottom left corner which was initially
the reading room’s location. There is also
a new area with all reference books
replacing adult fiction books
in the mid-west of the library.
The adult fiction books
are currently relocated to the mid-east side which also
has information desks and self-service machines while
there are no longer adult non-fiction books
there. On the 2 eastern corners, the children’s books
in the north have been converted into a lecture room and the enquiry deck in the other one is now a café.Submitted by dminh on
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