The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount of coffee exported from three countries between 2002 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the changing amount of coffee for export purposes from several countries in a ten-year span, measured in millions of kilograms.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that Brazil and
Costa
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Rica
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showed a more similar pattern,
while
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Colombia captured the opposite. To commence with, Brazil and
Costa
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Rica
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had identical patterns. Starting at a fairly similar level at around 13
million
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and 15
million
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at the beginning of the year, respectively.
While
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Brazil continued to increase and reached 20
million
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in 2010 before peaking at 25
million
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kilograms
at the end
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of the period,
Costa
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Rica
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experienced a fall to about 8
million
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before steadily rising to 20
million
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, 5
million
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lower than
Costa
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Rica
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in 2012.
However
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, Colombia experienced a more erratic pattern. Having stood at 5
million
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kilograms, the amount of exported coffee climbed to just above 10
million
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before hitting a low of around 3
million
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and rose sharply to 15
million
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in 2012, still the lowest exports among all countries.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words costa, rica, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph
  • illustrates
  • amount
  • exported
  • countries
  • Brazil
  • Vietnam
  • Colombia
  • over
  • 10-year period
  • experience
  • increase
  • coffee exports
  • Throughout
  • decade
  • consistently
  • highest
  • export volume
  • followed by
  • lowest
  • steady growth
  • sharp rise
  • significant
  • experienced
  • especially
  • significance
  • gradually declined
  • upward trend
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