Nowadays music plays irreplaceable role in our everyday life

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Nowadays
music
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plays
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role in our everyday life. For
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overhelming
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overwhelming
majority of
people
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it helps concentrate and
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stress
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,
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others claim that it disturbs their peace. In my opinion, I agree that
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am one who feels
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-free
whne
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when
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listening to songs. I tend to think that way,
out of
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several reasons which
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will explore in
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,
music
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along with
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noise-cancelling headphones
are
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an essential tool for dealing with background noises.
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, that background noise gives you a ton of anxiety, talking colleagues, clicking keyboards and etc. all that horrible noises could be muted with
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also
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helps with
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the release
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of hormones called
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dopamine
which gives you pleasure.
Music
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can be easily compared with smoking, main component of cigarettes is nicotine which
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dohamine
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dopamine
and serotonin,
hormone
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a hormone
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whose main purpose is to deal with
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, in your body.
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,
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often listen to
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while
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playing
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competitive
online video games, and
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has been helping me with
urge
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to yell at my teammates. I always felt relieved and hoped that
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will get better and we can win
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, even though we lost
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was ready for the next game. If I simply forgot to turn it on, I could have been too fragile to my own mistakes and my friend's mistakes.
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,
this
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demonstrates how
music
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controls
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Secondly
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music
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can bring other benefits to us which indirectly
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with
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stress
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: to boost working or studying productivity. When listening to
music
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, you can enhance
concentration
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your concentration
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level and ability to understand - two factors needed to study or work in fields
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as
programmers
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or
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. Making their homework or completing their project faster, makes people happy and
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fights
with
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stress
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. In conclusion,
i
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strongly agree that
music
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is the best way to combat
stress
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, but we can't turn a blind eye
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other benefits of
music
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.

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