You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -Say why he/she would not enjoy going to the college -Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her -Suggest types of job that would be suitable for fim/her

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Dear Janes, I hope you’re well. I’m writing with regard to your question about whether to continue studying or get a job. In my opinion, you won’t be comfortable if you go to college now.
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your family is having financial problems, so no one could support you with tuition fees and other living expenses. Other than that, you may find academic subjects tedious if you cannot associate them with practical experience.
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, finding a job may be the best solution for you now. You not only earn money to provide for yourself and may help your parents but
also
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can you get hands-on experience which is good for your personal development. In terms of jobs, I think you should find sales or marketing jobs because they allow you to meet various different people and you will learn a lot of valuable skills like communication skills or problem-solving skills which aren’t taught in universities. In the future, if you want to go on
further
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studying, it won’t be late. I hope that you will make the right decision soon. Best regards, Maria
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