The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The bar charts provided reveal the destination of British graduate and postgraduate students with the exception of those who attained full-time jobs after finishing college.
Overall
, as can be vividly seen from the diagrams, in both categories, further
study
was the most favorable
destination, Change the spelling
favourable
whereas
voluntary work
received not much attention. Furthermore
, almost the same number of postgraduate students who attended further
study
did part-time work
, while
for graduates, the same pattern did not transpire.
As illustrated by the charts, the figures for graduate students, regarding three clusters, namely voluntary work
, further
study
, and unemployment, were approximately ten times higher than those of postgraduates, at 3,500, 29,665, and 16,235, respectively.
The numbers for part-time work
, on the other hand
, followed a different pattern. More precisely, for graduates, this
number was slightly lower compared to the figure for further
study
, at 2,535 compared with 2,725, while
for graduates, the figure was nearly one-half of that for further
study
, at 17,735 in comparison with 29,665.Submitted by mahdieh.zkr765 on
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