The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The bar charts provided reveal the destination of British graduate and postgraduate students with the exception of those who attained full-time jobs after finishing college.
Overall
, as can be vividly seen from the diagrams, in both categories,
further
study
was the most
favorable
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destination,
whereas
voluntary
work
received not much attention.
Furthermore
, almost the same number of postgraduate students who attended
further
study
did part-time
work
,
while
for graduates, the same pattern did not transpire. As illustrated by the charts, the figures for graduate students, regarding three clusters, namely voluntary
work
,
further
study
, and unemployment, were approximately ten times higher than those of postgraduates, at 3,500, 29,665, and 16,235, respectively. The numbers for part-time
work
,
on the other hand
, followed a different pattern. More precisely, for graduates,
this
number was slightly lower compared to the figure for
further
study
, at 2,535 compared with 2,725,
while
for graduates, the figure was nearly one-half of that for
further
study
, at 17,735 in comparison with 29,665.
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  • Graduate
  • Postgraduate
  • Full-time work
  • Further education
  • Part-time work
  • Unemployment
  • Volunteering
  • Traveling
  • Gap year
  • Career progression
  • Job market
  • Transition
  • Academic life
  • Professional sphere
  • Economic factors
  • Social factors
  • Financial crisis
  • Long-term impact
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