The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first given pie chart illustrates where the amounts of
energy
spent by families in Australia while
the second chart depicts the proportion of pollution produced by energy
spending activity.
By and large, the heating processes are the sectors where the energy
is mostly spent, and total emissions are dominated by the pollution from the other appliances.
Heating has the biggest amount of total energy
use (42%), followed by Water heating which gets 30% of the proportion. In third place, there are Other appliances with 15% of the percentage. It is higher than the one from Refrigeration which only gets 7%. The smallest slice is occupied by Cooling which gets 2% .
On the other hand
, in another chart, the amount of Other Appliances (28%) is bigger than it is from the Heating (15%), yet lower than the proportion of Water heating (32%). Refrigeration (14%) is slightly lower than heating, yet higher than lighting (8%).Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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