The line graph shows the global demand for different textile fibers between 1980 and 2015

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The shown line graph compares world inquiry for four different textile fibres (polyester,

cotton

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, cellulosic, and

wool

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) over the 45 years from 1980 until 2015.

Overall

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, polyester, cellulosic and

cotton

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have witnessed a continuous increase,

whereas

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wool

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demand experienced a decreasing trend. As the graph suggests, polyester demand increased steadily in 1980 before rising dramatically

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1995 until 2015.

Moreover

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cotton

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and cellulosic fabric

also

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witnessed an

overall

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increasing trend,

while

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cotton

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demand stood at 25 million tons around years 2000, before fluctuating in the upcoming 5 years.

On the other hand

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wool

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inquiries have been rosed steadily from 1980 until 1995 before decreasing slightly in 2000.

Finally

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, it is reported that in 2015, only less than 3 million tons of requests are made for

wool

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fibres.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words cotton, wool with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

127 words

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The line graph shows the global demand for different textile fibers between 1980 and 2015

Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinions

Some say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that it’s a good idea to socialize with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it’s important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are many ways to find a job: newspaper advertisements, internet job search web sites, and personal recommendations. What do you think is the best way to find a job? Give reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Modern technology has made it possible for people to view exhibitions at home, so museums and art galleries will disappear soon. To what extent do you agree or disagree?