The number of international conferences in three cities

The graph illustrates the international
conferences
held in
cities
A, B, and
C
between 1965 and 2010.
Overall
, all
the
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three
cities
experienced fluctuations throughout the period.
Although
city
A had the most
conferences
at the beginning of the period, the opposite was true
at the end
of the period. In 1995, all the
cities
had almost the same number of
conferences
.
First,
it is noticeable that
city
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A hosted 35
conferences
in 1965.
This
was followed by
city
B with about 31 meetings.
In contrast
,
City
C
hosted non of the
conferences
for that year. Interestingly, there was a sharp drop for
City
A for the next decade with about 20
conferences
in 1975. In 1985, both
City
A and B had about 30
conferences
on average,
this
was followed up
with
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a down and up trend until 2010 with 20 and 25
conferences
respectively.
On the other hand
,
city
C
experienced a dramatic increase from zero in 1965 to over 25
conferences
in 1995. During
this
year, all the
cities
had
similar
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a similar
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number of international
conferences
.
Next,
City
C
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C's
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number of
conferences
decreased before reaching its highest point in 2010 with about 30
conferences
.
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