The graph shows Internet Usage in Taiwan by Age Group, 1998-2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart presents data
of
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internet
users
differentiated by age
groups
between 1998 to 2000. The bars are color
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specific
age
group, while
the numbers given are in percent
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per cent
Overall
, we see that most users
of internet
are in the Add an article
the internet
age
group 16-30 years, followed by the group 31-50 years all
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Nevertheless
, internet
use is increasing in the other two age
groups
, namely children under 15 and adults over 50 years. As expected, the
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of internet
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group
While
more than half of the internet
users
were young adults in 1998, this
changes to 44% in 2000. Likewise
, the older adults had a deacrease
with 4%, turning under 40% in Correct your spelling
decrease
decreased
year
2000.
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In contrast
, the youngest and oldest age
groups
participate more in the world wide web for
each year. The percentage increase is 7% and 6% respectively, leaving the Change preposition
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groups
presenting 9% and 10% of the whole population of internet
users
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