The line chart shows exports in billions of dollars

The line chart shows exports in billions of dollars
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The chart below depicts, over 22
years
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in 4 wide countries of the world, the fraction of Australian export in billions of dollars. From an
overall
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perspective, as has already been mentioned, the countries taken into consideration are 4, namely Japan, the US, China and India.
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,information is the process illustrated, which starts from
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years
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the years
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1990 to end up with the period time of 2012.
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with the first year ( 1990), it's evident that its highest fraction of 25% is for the country of Japan,
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the lowest of 1% is for India's case.
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, China has 1% more than India and US is slightly over 10%. The situation, still with the same classification until
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2000, when the position of the countries starts to change.
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, China rise its fee, reaching the top over the 12
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,
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the US will absolutely drop its process; Becoming the
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one. Japan,
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, will deal with a decline under 19%, rather than the first position.
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, with what has been already analysed and compared, it's crucial to highlight that, over the
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many circumstances could change, moving from the first to the
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.
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