you have recently missed a project dedline which resulted in your company losing an important client. write a letter to your manager. in your letter: 1. apologies what happened. 2. explain why you missed deadline 3. tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future

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Dear Sir, I am Amanpreet

kaur

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Kaur

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, a new

employ

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in your company, who has been hired for

sales

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a sales

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represenatative

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representative

position. I am writing

this

letter, to

apologies

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apologise

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for losing a client. I missed the deadline for the main project because of

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family emergency. I was working really hard on it to make it successful. But

unfortunatly

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unfortunately

due to

the

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apply

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my closest

friends

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accident, I got

distarcted

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distracted

and got behind with all my project work. In future, to avoid

this

mistake, I will start working on all my projects right away, so that I will be able to complete them on time. I hope you will accept my apology and give me another chance to improve. Your's faithfully Amanpreet Kaur

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

120 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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you have recently missed a project dedline which resulted in your company losing an important client. write a letter to your manager. in your letter: 1. apologies what happened. 2. explain why you missed deadline 3. tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future

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Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, the differences in ages between parents and children are greater than in the past. Do you think the advantages of the development outweigh the disadvantages?

Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent (widespread) and eventually replace traditional foods and methods of preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.