you have recently missed a project dedline which resulted in your company losing an important client. write a letter to your manager. in your letter: 1. apologies what happened. 2. explain why you missed deadline 3. tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future

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Dear Sir, I am Amanpreet
kaur
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Kaur

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, a new
employ
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employee

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in your company, who has been hired for
sales
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a sales

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represenatative
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representative

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position. I am writing
this
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letter, to
apologies
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apologise

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for losing a client. I missed the deadline for the main project because of
my
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a

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family emergency. I was working really hard on it to make it successful. But
unfortunatly
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unfortunately

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,
due to
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the
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apply

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my closest
friends
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friend's

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accident, I got
distarcted
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distracted

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and got behind with all my project work. In future, to avoid
this
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mistake, I will start working on all my projects right away, so that I will be able to complete them on time. I hope you will accept my apology and give me another chance to improve. Your's faithfully Amanpreet Kaur

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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