The chart and table below give information about what nursing graduates did after finishing their course in the UK in 2009
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nurse
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a nurse
the nurse
health
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sector
.
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health
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the health
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in the second Linking Words
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nurse
accounted for the highest proportion of Fix the agreement mistake
nurses
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nurse
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nurses
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sector
.
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the destination
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nurses
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the nurses
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health
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the health
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84%. Change preposition
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further
, accounting for the lowest section in the Linking Words
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nurses
working and studying (8%) is 4 times as high as these unemployed (2%).
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the second Change preposition
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chart
illustrating Use synonyms
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the rate in Change preposition
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specific
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the specific
health
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sector
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hospital
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the hospital
nurses
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the most at 72.9%, nearly three fourth of the Change preposition
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the contrary, it is witnessed that only 0.4% Change the preposition
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nursing
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nurses
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nurses
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chart
, 10.3% worked as community Use synonyms
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nurse
and midwives stood up as the second place in the Fix the agreement mistake
nurses
chart
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