Some people think it is better for children to have many short holidays during the year. Others believe that it would be beneficial to have fewer, longer vocations. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Holidays

are one of the best days of a

student

's life. A group of individuals believe that youth should get an excessive number of

breaks

throughout the year of schooling. Another, modernist claims that authorities provide fix number of

holidays

for the year to each

student

for their benefit. In my opinion, children should not be allowed too many

breaks

between their

academics

because it is one of the most precious things which helps them to become successful. In these looming paragraphs,

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will discuss both perspectives. To commence with, behind every successful person

academics

, hard work and focus matter a lot. In child's early growth, if they will get ample amount of

breaks

in between their studies, definitely they will distract, as a matter of

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they will not be able to focus properly.

Moreover

, good grades will help each

student

to get into the best institutions for higher studies and after

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the path to success gets clear for them,

Thus

an excessive number of

holidays

should not be allowed for students.

However

, it is an undeniable fact that skills

also

play a significant role to become successful, if children will get more

holidays

in their

academics

then

they would not be stressed from their studies.

Additionally

, they will get a chance to explore themselves like what they are and what they can do something different to become successful. In a nutshell, each aspect has its pros and cons.

Although

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vacations are important for each

student

so that they can explore more skills and master them, I believe the probability of becoming successful through good grades in

academics

is significantly higher and distraction

due to

breaks

will deviate their minds and they may lose the path of success.