The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram illustrates the average weekly
expenses
of Use synonyms
families
in a particular country from 1968 to 2018, encompassing basic groceries, accommodation, and various other items.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the data reveals significant shifts in Linking Words
expenditure
patterns over the 50-year period. Notably, the proportion of Use synonyms
income
allocated to food declined considerably, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
leisure
and Use synonyms
entertainment
Use synonyms
expenses
experienced a substantial increase. Meanwhile, housing costs showed a sharp rise in 2018, and Use synonyms
expenditure
on Use synonyms
household
Use synonyms
goods
remained relatively stable throughout the years.
In 1968, food accounted for the highest proportion of Use synonyms
families
' weekly Use synonyms
expenses
, representing approximately 35% of their Use synonyms
income
. Use synonyms
However
, by 2018, Linking Words
this
figure had significantly decreased to around 17%, suggesting a noticeable decrease in spending on groceries.
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On the other hand
, Linking Words
leisure
and Use synonyms
entertainment
Use synonyms
expenses
displayed a remarkable upward trend over the 50-year period. In 2018, these Use synonyms
expenses
constituted the largest portion of Use synonyms
families
' weekly earnings, representing 22% of their Use synonyms
income
. Use synonyms
This
figure not only exceeded the Linking Words
expenditure
in 1968 but Use synonyms
also
more than doubled it. Linking Words
This
trend indicates a growing emphasis on Linking Words
leisure
activities and Use synonyms
entertainment
in modern society.
Housing costs Use synonyms
also
experienced a substantial increase in 2018, reaching approximately 19% of Linking Words
families
' weekly Use synonyms
income
. Use synonyms
This
indicates a higher financial burden placed on households Linking Words
due to
rising housing prices over the years.
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In contrast
, Linking Words
expenditure
on Use synonyms
household
Use synonyms
goods
remained relatively stable, accounting for 8% of Use synonyms
families
' weekly Use synonyms
income
in both 1968 and 2018. Use synonyms
This
suggests that despite Linking Words
overall
changes in Linking Words
expenditure
patterns, Use synonyms
families
have consistently allocated a similar proportion of their Use synonyms
income
to Use synonyms
household
Use synonyms
goods
over time.
In conclusion, the data from the diagram demonstrates notable shifts in spending patterns among Use synonyms
families
in Use synonyms
this
country. Linking Words
While
food Linking Words
expenses
have decreased significantly, Use synonyms
leisure
and Use synonyms
entertainment
costs have seen a substantial rise. Use synonyms
Moreover
, housing Linking Words
expenses
have become more burdensome, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
expenditure
on Use synonyms
household
Use synonyms
goods
has remained relatively constant.Use synonyms
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