The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The visual representation provides information about the police budget in 2017 and 2018 in an area of Britain. The given data is in
million
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pounds
, and it reveals Use synonyms
both
the source of the income and the expenses.
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Firstly
, there are 3 main categories of the budget source. The amount of money coming from the National Linking Words
Goverment
had inclined Correct your spelling
government
slighty
, from 175.5 to 177.8 Correct your spelling
slightly
million
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pounds
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Furthermore
, the second group, which is the Local Taxes, had an even bigger improvement. The money allocated to the Police Budget increased from 91.2 to 102.3 Linking Words
million
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pounds
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Lastly
, Other Sources happened to be steady in Linking Words
both
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years
, only Use synonyms
an
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apply
approximate
half a Change the word
approximately
million
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pounds
were added to the Use synonyms
last
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years
value.
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year's
years'
As a result
, the 3 categories added up to a total of 318.6 Linking Words
million
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pounds
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from
2017 304.7 Change preposition
in
mill
, making Change to a plural noun
mills
this
a huge rise in terms of money.
The expenses are divided into 3 groups. Salaries, which is the biggest fraction in Linking Words
both
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years
, fell down by 6%, which made it to be 69% in 2018. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Technology Linking Words
spendings
increased by 6%, with a value of Fix the agreement mistake
spending
total
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a total
14
% of the expenses. Change preposition
of 14
Lastly
, Buildings and transport remained steady, with a value of 17% of Linking Words
spendings
in Fix the agreement mistake
spending
both
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years
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