some people believe that in the near future there will be no borders between two countries while other fell that national borders will always remain. discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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in medical science are by far the most significant advances in world society over the
last
2 centuries.
Medicine
nowadays is developing rapidly. Medical science got its advances in society dating from
1800s
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the 1800s
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. Now I’m going to talk about how it changed in 200 years.
Medicine
is an occupation that saves
people
’s lives.
Medicine
was invented by
Hyppocrates
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Hippocrates
. He was the first doctor that made operations,
healed
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people
by using roots and greens. I think that
Hyppocrates
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Hippocrates
is the greatest contributor to the
medicine
generally. After
Hyppocrates
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Hippocrates
,
medicine
was slowly developing throughout history, leading
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to the nowadays innovations.
Medicine
is part of our life that we can’t live without.
People
tend to get sick,
therefore
they need to be cured. And
medicine
is the solution. Changes in
medicine
in recent years are drastic, and
this
is unbelievable. If we take a look at the modern equipment
that is
used,
modern
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technologies that are applied, we can see how far progress has gone.
Moreover
, I looked through the news about modern
medicine
and found out that now
medicine
can recover all organs, cure hardly every disease and more.
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medicine
has altered a lot. In
a
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conclusion, I would say that we’re living in a progressing society and
medicine
is part of it too. The most interesting is that it never stops going forward. It helps
people
to live a long life by extending
course
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of life. I think that in
near
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people
will live centuries and we become stronger faster and smarter. In
this
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I dwelled on how
medicine
changed in recent years and how it will change in future.
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