In some parts of the world, the rate of divorce has increased dramatically over the past few decades. Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.
Nowadays, couples face
with
various difficulties and they should get ready for them. In some countries, the Change preposition
apply
divorce
rate has surged significantly in the past few decades. In the following paragraph, I will discuss reasons
and provide potential solutions.
First of all, Correct article usage
the reasons
financial
crisis can be possibly one of the Add an article
a financial
reason
Change to a plural noun
reasons
of
Change preposition
for
high
Correct article usage
the high
divorce
rate. The cause of this
issue
can be considered as the country’s inflation. Salary and earnings won’t commensurate
with inflation. Add a missing verb
be commensurate
Therefore
at this
particular stage
the problem will rises Add a comma
,stage
due to
couple’s
dissatisfaction Correct article usage
the couple’s
about
the whole thing. Change preposition
with
For example
, In iran
the inflation rate is deteriorating every day. So, the majority of people face Change the capitalization
Iran
with
financial difficulties Change preposition
apply
specially
Replace the word
especially
the
couples. Correct article usage
apply
As a
result
the couple have a tendency to Add a comma
,result
divorce
. to address the issue
, governmental aid must put
in place in order to help couples Add a missing verb
be put
for
their financial crisis.
Change preposition
with
secondly
, addiction to certain types of drug
may Fix the agreement mistake
drugs
leads
to the couple’s Change the verb form
lead
divorce
. If the life expectancy drops, they will have tendency
for a drug. Add an article
a tendency
therefore
, their life will be imbalanced because,
one of the parties does not Remove the comma
apply
want
get away from their addiction. Add the particle
towant
For instance
, If one of the parties addicts
to a drug they may do some dangerous activities because they are mentally balanced. To address Add a missing verb
is addicts
this
problem, there are some drugs
consultants which the person may go there to fix the Change the noun form
drug
issue
.
In conclusion, life has many ups and downs and full
of surprises. The couple should consider that Add a missing verb
is full
divorce
is the not only option. First of all
they should try to fix the Add a comma
,all
issue
. if it does not work as to be expected the
may Correct your spelling
they
divorce
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