In some parts of the world, the rate of divorce has increased dramatically over the past few decades. Explain some possible reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions.

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various difficulties and they should get ready for them. In some countries, the

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rate has surged significantly in the past few decades. In the following paragraph, I will discuss

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and provide potential solutions. First of all,

financial

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crisis can be possibly one of the

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rate. The cause of

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can be considered as the country’s inflation. Salary and earnings won’t

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with inflation.

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at

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particular

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the problem will rises

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dissatisfaction

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the whole thing.

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the inflation rate is deteriorating every day. So, the majority of people face

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financial difficulties

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the

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couples.

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result

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the couple have a tendency to

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. to address the

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, governmental aid must

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in place in order to help couples

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their financial crisis.

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, addiction to certain types of

drug

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to the couple’s

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. If the life expectancy drops, they will have

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for a drug.

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, their life will be imbalanced because

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one of the parties does not

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get away from their addiction.

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addicts

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to a drug they may do some dangerous activities because they are mentally balanced. To address

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problem, there are some

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consultants which the person may go there to fix the

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. In conclusion, life has many ups and downs and

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of surprises. The couple should consider that

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is the not only option. First of

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they should try to fix the

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. if it does not work as to be expected

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may

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.