Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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The popularity of multinational

companies

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widespread in developing nations. In the following

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I will discuss

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and cons of these multinational

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for the country and elaborate

them

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. One of the main benefits is that it not only

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the

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country to be developed faster but

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help

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the economy to flourish. These multinational

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have a positive effect on the country itself and it is because these

companies

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are very lucrative for the government

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the government itself may spend the money for the people.

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it is a

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situation. Another positive aspect of these multinational

companies

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is that it creates job for the locals. It is evident that these business conglomerates are massive and have different sectors that

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to be monitored all the time.

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, job demand for these

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high.

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, Apple company has many branches

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all around the world so it

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many locals for its different sectors. One of the downsides of these

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is that small

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bear the full impact of their presence.

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people have a high tendency to their

product

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and they prefer to buy products from

a multinational

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multinational companies

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companies

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rather

small

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retailers

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, Nike has numerous branches

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all around the world

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many people would prefer to buy their

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clothes in

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Nike’s shop.

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retailers

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will not sell as much as these multinational

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. In conclusion, despite the fact it has some advantages

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as economy

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economy

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improvement and

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jobs for locals, it has disadvantages which may

worth

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taking into consideration

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as small

retailers

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bear the full impact of business conglomerates.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

279 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Globalization
Multinational corporations (MNCs)
Foreign direct investment (FDI)
Developing economies
Infrastructure development
Capacity building
Cultural diversity
Sustainability
Corporate social responsibility (CSR)
Technological transfer
Economic disparity
Market saturation
Brain drain
Indigenous industries
Expatriate management
Trade imbalance

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Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Fully explain your ideas

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