Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries.  What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

The popularity of multinational
companies
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widespread in developing nations. In the following
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I will discuss
pros
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and cons of these multinational
companies
for the country and elaborate
them
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. One of the main benefits is that it not only
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the
the
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country to be developed faster but
also
it
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help
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the economy to flourish. These multinational
companies
have a positive effect on the country itself and it is because these
companies
are very lucrative for the government
therefore
the government itself may spend the money for the people.
Hence
it is a
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situation. Another positive aspect of these multinational
companies
is that it creates job for the locals. It is evident that these business conglomerates are massive and have different sectors that
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to be monitored all the time.
Therefore
, job demand for these
companies
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high.
For instance
, Apple company has many branches
in
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all around the world so it
hire
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many locals for its different sectors. One of the downsides of these
companies
is that small
retailers
bear the full impact of their presence.
It is clear that
people have a high tendency to their
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and they prefer to buy products from
a multinational
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multinational companies
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companies
rather
small
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than small
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retailers
.
For example
, Nike has numerous branches
in
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all around the world
that
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many people would prefer to buy their
athlete
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clothes in
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Nike’s shop.
Hence
,
retailers
will not sell as much as these multinational
companies
. In conclusion, despite the fact it has some advantages
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economy
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improvement and
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jobs for locals, it has disadvantages which may
worth
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taking into consideration
such
as small
retailers
bear the full impact of business conglomerates.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • Multinational corporations (MNCs)
  • Foreign direct investment (FDI)
  • Developing economies
  • Infrastructure development
  • Capacity building
  • Cultural diversity
  • Sustainability
  • Corporate social responsibility (CSR)
  • Technological transfer
  • Economic disparity
  • Market saturation
  • Brain drain
  • Indigenous industries
  • Expatriate management
  • Trade imbalance
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