In the past, many people had skill such as making their own clothes and doing repair to things in the house. In many countries, nowadays, skills like these are disappearing. Why do you think this change is happening? How far is this situation true in your country?

People

with technical skills

such

as repairing broken

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and making new

clothes

for

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were very common in the past.

However

, all those special skills are about to disappear now across the globe. In my opinion, there are a variety of reasons that makes

this

change.

Firstly

, industrialization was a factor that contributed to

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change. Because of

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technology, different kinds of machines introduced to the

world

and businessmen start to expand their business by using machines

instead

of hiring more workers.

This

makes fast fashion exists nowadays and gives customers many choices in chain stores and shopping online, and the company can sell

clothes

at

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price.

Secondly

, the living standard of

people

is improved compared to a century before. Many

people

had

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big

family

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families

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with many children and they are

also

low income

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group in

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society. Parents merely supported the basic cost of living,

for example

, food and water, and these families do not have extra money to buy

clothes

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each child and pay for skilled workers for repairing. And now,

people

with

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standard of living, it is seldom for

people

to make

clothes

or to repair things themselves.

Thirdly

, a majority of pupils are not educated in

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vocational training but the

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in today’s

world

. Many young

people

choose to study academic subjects

such

as science and information technology rather than to choose as

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or

carpenter

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carpenters

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.

Therefore

, we can predict that these skilled workers are disappearing gradually in the future.

This

situation happened in the rest of the

world

and

also

it is true in my city. As mentioned above, technology makes our lives in an easier way and there is no reason for modern

people

to consume much time and effort for these activities.

Besides

, the working pattern for

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young

people

is

also

changing and some of them choose to be slasher as their career. In conclusion, those skills which are common in the past and now

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disappearing in many parts of the

world

.