The graph below shows fast food consumption among men and women in 2015
The bar chart provides information about junk food consumption, between males and females of 4 different
age
groups in 2015.
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Overall
, Linking Words
index
of average consumed calories per day in the Correct article usage
the index
age
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group
of both Use synonyms
men
and women from 18 to 34 was the highest, Use synonyms
whereas
the same statistics were the lowest among individuals, who were over 65.
Starting with looking at the percentage of the most popular Linking Words
group
, the number of Use synonyms
men
was approximately 17 %, Use synonyms
while
the number of women was 16%. With regards to Linking Words
two
following groups, percentages ofCorrect article usage
the two
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men's
men
consumption of junk food , who were 35-49 and 50-64 were nearly 10 % and 9 % respectively. Regarding Use synonyms
to
females statistics of eating unhealthy dishes among these two groups Remove the preposition
apply
was
lower, than Correct subject-verb agreement
were
men
and was 9 % Use synonyms
in
average. Another interesting Change preposition
on
age
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group
is elderly individuals, who were in the Use synonyms
age
of over 65, the graph illustrated, that despite Use synonyms
index
being very high in the first Correct article usage
the index
age
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group
, the statistics Use synonyms
of
both females and males were extremely low, just above 4% Change preposition
for
by
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for
men
and almost 4% by women respectively.Use synonyms
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