Money manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believed that sugary
products
should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less
sugar
. Personally, I can neither completely agree nor disagree with
this
statement for a variety of reasons. I partly agree that sugary
products
should be made more expensive. One of the main reasons can be that increase in sugary
products
price
makes it more difficult for people to buy
sugar
, which they will consider before buying.
This
means that they will replace it with cheaper sweet vegetables. Another reason can be that increasing the
price
of
sugar
will
also
reduce the
price
of sugary foods
such
as cakes and candies, thereby reducing the risk of diseases
such
as diabetes and obesity.
For example
, my friends drink 2 soft drinks a day and most of them are seriously overweight, they look very tired and heavy.
On the other hand
, I disagree with the viewpoint that sugary
products
should be made more expensive.
Firstly
, the increase in
sugar
prices makes sugarcane farmers unable to sell sugarcane.
This
is because the increase in
sugar
prices reduces the consumption of sugary
products
.
Secondly
, Increasing the
price
of sugary
products
will make it difficult for poor children to buy sweets.
For instance
, kids who are given 10000 VND will only get 1 candy
instead
of 2 like before. In conclusion,
although
more expensive sugary
products
will cause some problems, I’m convinced that sugary
products
should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less
sugar
thereby reducing diseases
such
as obesity and diabetes.
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