The chart below shows the percentage of the day working adults spent doing different activities in a particular country in 1958 and in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of the day working adults spent doing different activities in a particular country in 1958 and in 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented pie charts highlight the proportion of time employed by grown-ups spent on various activities in a specific country during the years 1958 and 2008. Looking from an
overall
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perspective,
it is clear that
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working takes up the majority of adults' days in both years. As can be seen in the former diagram, doing a job takes up an exponential 33%,
whereas
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travel to work is at a measly 2%.
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, right next to the highest share is sleeping at 32%. When juxtaposed to each other, only a 1 per cent difference can be seen.
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, adults in a place of employment spend 19% of their time going out with close family or friends.
On the other hand
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, a mere 8% are at home, unwinding. The latter chart is extremely diverse from the first one.
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, the percentage of working increased by 9 per cent.
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, resting declined from 32% to 25%. The mentioned numbers allude to individuals dedicating more hours to work
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of taking a nap.
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