The pie chart below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The given two pie charts compare 5 kinds of production of energy including coal, gas,

petro

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petrol

, other,

nuclear

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and nuclear

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in France in two different years.

It is clear that

the proportion of petro experienced a considerable fall,

while

this

figure for coal, gas, other and nuclear rise over the given two

period

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periods

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. In 1995, 29,27%of

energy

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the energy

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produce

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production

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rate went on

petro

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Petro

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which has the largest pie

of

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apply

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the

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apply

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chart.

Hovewer

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However

, by 2005,

this

figure had

decrease

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decreased

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almost the 20%. During the decade, the demand for coal experienced a

percent

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per cent

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increase from 29,80% to 30,93%.

By contrast

, in terms of gas, the proportion of

this energy goods

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these energy goods

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this

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in this

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category made up

29,63%in

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29,63% in

1995, after 10 years

this

figure saw a little change to 30.33%. The smallest proportion of the chart belonging to

other

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others

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in the first year, and there was

a

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an

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increase from 4.90% to 9.10%.In

sense

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the sense

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of

this

, the nuclear category

rise

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rises

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to roughly 4%.