The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40 years.
The provided bar chart illustrates the average
rainfall
in Australia by month last
year, while
the given line indicates the average rainfall
for Australia by month for the last
40 years.
Overall
, it can be seen that over the shown period of 40 years, the amount of rainfall
was altering gradually, with some fluctuations occuring
in April and September.
If to look at the bars, Correct your spelling
occurring
it is clear that
in January the amount
of raindrops was the highest, over 60mm, Change the quantifier
number
while
at the end
of the summer, and by the start of autumn, in August, September and October the proportion of rain was less than 20mm.
Turning to the details, the portion which was high enough at the beginning of winter decreased rapidly in the month April
, going downwards to 20mm exactly. Change preposition
of April
Consequently
, when it started to increase in March by 40mm, the index dropped to a smaller fraction. However
, by December the statistics were stable and the total rainfall
dose remained 40
mm.Change preposition
at 40
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