The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40 years.

The bar chart below shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for last

year. The line shows the average rainfall for Australia by month for the last 40

years.
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The provided bar chart illustrates the average
rainfall
in Australia by month
last
year,
while
the given line indicates the average
rainfall
for Australia by month for the
last
40 years.
Overall
, it can be seen that over the shown period of 40 years, the amount of
rainfall
was altering gradually, with some fluctuations
occuring
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occurring
in April and September. If to look at the bars,
it is clear that
in January the
amount
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of raindrops was the highest, over 60mm,
while
at the end
of the summer, and by the start of autumn, in August, September and October the proportion of rain was less than 20mm. Turning to the details, the portion which was high enough at the beginning of winter decreased rapidly in the month
April
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of April
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, going downwards to 20mm exactly.
Consequently
, when it started to increase in March by 40mm, the index dropped to a smaller fraction.
However
, by December the statistics were stable and the total
rainfall
dose remained
40
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at 40
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mm.
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