Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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exploration sometime offers us to deal with natural issues and something new.
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, it can be cost us a huge amount of money and it is unnecessary when there are many things that crucial in our society. I personally feel that government should concentrate on their nation. These days, many
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try to build their rocket launcher in order to make an exploration on
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. These tend to be better well-off
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which continue to spend on their development.
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, people in developing
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are faced with problems
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as food shortages, inequality in education, and water scarcity which are common among them.
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,
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of creating a
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nation, it is could be better if a large amount of money allocated for building schools, hospitals, and water storage.
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, in
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continents, many of the superior
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around the world now have donated to educational programs and welfare benefits.
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,
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will lead the next generations into a prosperous and healthier society in the future life.
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, decarbonisation is the other thing that should be concerned.
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of
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exploration, there would be a lot of pollution in the air towards
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expeditions. So, rather than focusing on
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expeditions, the government better to make development on renewable resources and clean energy harvesters. Obviously, it is not only possible but
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it can cost as creating rockets, but it aids us in reducing carbon emissions. Wind turbines and solar panels are the best examples of
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and there are several deep effects through carbon reduction, often unseen. In conclusion, learning about the universe is possible and useful for us,
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, it is unnecessary
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of addressing national issues.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • complete waste
  • benefit the nation
  • technological advancements
  • foster
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