Although you are meant to present your thesis project in one month, your sister is getting married in Spain at the same time. You would like to change dates for your presentation. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter: · Explain the situation · Remind the professor of your academic achievements to date · Ask for a different date to present your thesis

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Dear Professor, I am writing

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letter to request you change the date of the science project that suppose to be submitted on 1 June 2023. Sir,we are going to organise a wedding function for my sister in Spain on 30 May 2023.So, I am going there with my family.Since I was not aware of

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project so I booked the tickets

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.It is difficult for me to cancel my plan as she is my only sibling and I am very excited for her. I am a very bright student and scored 89%

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semester.

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,I got a scholarship as I crack the difficult exam in science all over the state.So,I will be very grateful if you could change the presentation date .I will prepare it until the first week of July for sure. Yours sincerely, Kiran

kiranbaidwan064Fri Jun 23 2023

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

136 words

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can we do to address these problems?