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The line graph shows thefts per thousands vehicles in four European countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information and make comparison where relevant.

The line graph shows thefts per thousands vehicles in four European countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information and make comparison where relevant.
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This
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 provided line graph compares the number of car
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 per thousand of the population in European countries from 1990 to 1999, in a period of 9 years.
Overall
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, it can be seen that automobile
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 in Great Britain were far higher than in the other three countries throughout the whole time frame.
To begin
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, vehicle
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 have a similar pattern in Sweden, France, and Canada over the first five years of the period, all remaining at a range between 7 and 9 per thousand.
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, there was a decline in the number of vehicles stolen in France and Canada, both stopped at 6, Sweden experienced an upward trend, and finished at just below 15.
On the other hand
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, car
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 in the UK started at nearly 18, which far exceeded the other countries. After ,that it fluctuated over the next 9 years to reach a peak of 20 cars per thousand, in 1996. Yet it dropped gradually to end at just around 17, where it was lower than it began.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words thefts with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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