You need to take three days off work because of an important event. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter Explain why you have to take time off work Give details such as when and where of the event Approving the importance of the event related to your work Suggest who could cover your place while you are away

Dear Boss , Greetings I am writing to inform you that I would like to take 3 days off work. Ext week I am going to attend
conference
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a conference
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in Riyadh .I have to be there from
6th
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the 6th
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of July till
8th
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the 8th
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of July it is just a few days . It is
a
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apply
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critical
to
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of
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me to
going
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there and I will speak there about my work ,
therefore
it would be more beneficial for our company.
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, many people will come to see our project so I am thinking can I employ some a new employee for our company . If you have a chance please come to the conference to see me and
looking
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for places . I have
been
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talked with
colleague
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my colleague
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Ms.
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Sarah she will take
all
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on all
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my
task
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while
I am there She is confident and I am pretty sure she will do the best for our work . I discussed with her if there
any
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difficult decisions to contact me . Yours faithfully, Ruqayah
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