TASK 1 The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The diagram bar shows which hobbies are more popular among toddlers in Australia.

Overall

, it can be seen that watching television and videos is the most popular feature

while

skateboarding and rollerblading are the least one in both genders. First of all and regarding boys, there are three activities that stand out. The first one refers to watching TV/videos which

present

Correct subject-verb agreement

presents

show examples

a total of 100 per cent. Electronic and computer games come in second place with a percentage of 80.

Lastly

and in third place is bike riding with a total of 70%.

In contrast

this

, the two hobbies which are less liked are skateboarding and art and craft, both with an equal percentage of 40. As for the girl's group, despite the slight differences, there are some that are noticed.

To begin

with, just like the boys, watching television is

also

the most popular one with 100%. It can be seen that riding a bike and playing computer games come next in girls’ preferences with 60 per cent. The leisure activity less popular is skateboarding with only 30 per cent.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

182 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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TASK 1 The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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