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A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter describe •what the book was about explain •how this book influenced you •say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my satisfaction with the
book
 that I read, Rich Dad and poor dad. I have
also
 been a fan of your
book
. The
book
 that you wrote recently is truly amazing.
Furthermore
, the way you have explained everything is very clear and simple to understand. As I started my job recently the
book
 is very
usefull
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useful
 for me, especially in
the
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terms of investment.
Additionally
,
this
book
 has taught me many things and has motivated me a lot regarding
money
.
In addition
, he has
also
 taught me how to save
money
 and how to invest the
money
 for future development. I would like to add
this
book
 will influence a lot of many young people and help them to know the value of
the
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money
. Yours faithfully, John
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