You recently attended a conference and would like to give a presentation to your colleagues about it. Write a letter to your manager and include: The topic of the conference Why you want to present about it When it could be done

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to express my enthusiasm about the conference that was held on

last

Sunday. You have already known that the conference was based on the lunch of our new product "NAPA".

Moreover

, everyone in the hall praises

about

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the innovative invention and shared their experiences and ideas. It is worth mentioning that as a leader of the new project, I would like to share the knowledge that have gained through the conference with my colleagues. By

this

, they will be

up-to-dated

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about the launch and can

also

discuss their thoughts.

Furthermore

, if you give permission, I want to give a presentation based on the topic. In

addtion

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addition

this

, we can hold a meeting on the upcoming Wednesday in the main hall room. Over and above, Your

present

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in the meeting is highly expected. Please let me know what you think about it. I await your prompt response. With regards, Lisa

Submitted by Lisa Bhuiyan on Fri Jun 23 2023

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You recently attended a conference and would like to give a presentation to your colleagues about it. Write a letter to your manager and include: The topic of the conference Why you want to present about it When it could be done

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