The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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The bar chart illustrates the export income from a particular region in five categories during 2015 and 2016. The statistics in the table display variation proportion in previous categories of exports with a comparison between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
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, all categories had a rose in both data, except the
amount
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of games and jewellery decline significantly from 2015 until 2016.
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the bar chart, the number of Engineered goods and Textiles had the highest soar so that, these stood above 60 and 30 respectively in 2016. Petroleum products and agricultural products grow slightly between the period of mention.
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, the number of Gems and jewellery dropped from almost 43 billion $ to roughly 40 in 2016.
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there was the highest change in textiles by more than 15% between 2015 and 2016 and
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Engineered goods were a second place with 8.5%.
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, the value of Gems and jewellery had the greatest decline by about 5% in the period in question.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • categories
  • value
  • percentage change
  • compare
  • trends
  • changes
  • chart
  • table
  • overview
  • introduce
  • highlight
  • describe
  • summarize
  • information
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