Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

there are some notions among

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that the chief environmental issue of our era is the extinction of some specific

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or animals. There are some opposite views

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they assume the other environmental troubles are more serious. In

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. On the one hand, there are those who subscribe to the

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that, nowadays the main duty of mankind prevent some particular

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and animals from extinction. From

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point of

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they say, we are able to use some species the produce some medicine.

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, the initial

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of most vitamins bring from some

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and if we do not have these vegetarians, we will be unable to provide these drugs.

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, I do not find

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argument valid because

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developing science, we will provide some better

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instead

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of previous

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.

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, many commentators justifiably argue that there are several environmental crises that have a decisive factor

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human health. From

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perspective, In the near future all over the world, we have a

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crisis

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the decline

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of clean

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.

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, humans have to find a new source of

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from nature. If we pay attention to

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the environment from some diseases we are able to drop the negative effects of future crises.

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, the majority of basic

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human needs are provided by meat and vegetable. So if we do not have safe sources, we will not have healthy feeds. In conclusion,

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there are some merits from save some species of

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and animals from cratering some drugs, the positive points of

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are far more. Environmental protection is highly likely to have a good effect on the safety of

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and basic

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of , mankind's feeds.