Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from you house / flat. Wirte a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Mr John, I am writing to apologise for the loud noise that you heard from my flat. My name is Johnny and I am your new neighbor who has come to stay. I am 22 years old and I celebrated my birthday

this

week in which many people were involved.

Moreover

, the party was full of excitement and I didn't notice the noise was too loud that could disturb my neighbour. I celebrated my birthday after 5 years because I stayed outside for my studies for 5 years and because of

this

I got

over excited

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. Once again apologies for the inconvenience caused by me. Next time

this

won't happen. I hope you understand my problem and I will organise a party in a private hall. Yours faithfully, Johnny

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

130 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Leaders and directors in an organization are normally older people. Some people think having a younger leader would be better. Do you agree or disagree?