the pie charts show the electricity generated in germany and france from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. summarize the information and make comparison.write at least 150 words
The pie chart gives information about how much
electricity
generated
from renewable and all other Add a missing verb
was generated
sources
in Germany
and France
in 2009.
Overall
, it can be said that there is a huge difference among these countries’ types of sources
. In Germany
conventional thermal was mostly used for Add a comma
,Germany
electricity
generation but in France
it was used less than renewable and nuclear.
The first noticeable aspect of the data given in the graph is that both of the countries’ Add a comma
,France
electricity
depended on one kind of source. In Germany
conventional thermal Add a comma
,Germany
sources
got the first rank with roughly 60 per cent
. In France
Nuclear sources
led to the other sources
with 76 per cent
in the given specific year.
Another prominent aspect of the data given in the chart is that renewable sources
took up almost the same area in the pie chart. But there are differences between the two countries’ details about renewable sources
use except solar sources
. Solar sources
were used almost
the same rates. Wind and biomass Change preposition
at almost
sources
provided 77 per cent
of Germany
's Electricity
generation. In France
80 per Add a comma
,France
cent
of electricity
generation was provided by hydroelectric.Submitted by yunussemreozkaya on
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