Some say it is better to have vertical cities with lots of tall buildings rather than horizontal cities with fewer tall buildings.

It is argued by a few that it is more convenient for

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to have more of taller

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of less tall

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, agree with the statement to a large extent that

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must have more of taller

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accommodate more offices and other agencies in one building,which requires lesser

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to be filled and used for a construction of a building.

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could be used for other purposes

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as parks and recreational trails.

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, traffic could be reduced by constructing more taller

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taller

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buildings

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would require roads to be narrower to create more space for the construction of many

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.

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, if a mall was made taller with parking spaces within the building, more

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to build roads in order to ease traffic

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single lanes.

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,

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with many taller

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have a better skyline than those with fewer tall

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attracts more tourists to the

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, which in turn

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the revenue of the local stores and businesses.

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, though

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with tall

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have more advantages , there are a few benefits

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that have

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tall

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. The primary benefit is that

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each individual building can be used for a specific purpose of its own rather than

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and stores sharing these

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with others. In a nutshell, ultimately

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that have many tall

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can use their

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for more purposes

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accommodating many offices and manpower in one tall building and

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reducing traffic in the city which is convenient for the people. It

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attracts more tourists with its beautiful skyline and

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it

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the flow of money.

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in comparison , the

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with

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tall

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can only benefit

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each company or store having a building of its own.