You are planning a holiday to Australia . You have been given the name and address of a hotel in the centre of Sydney and would like further information. Write a letter to a hotel. Ask about the availability of the rooms and the hotel’s facilities . Find out if the hotel arranges day trips and ask them to send you a brochure.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter requesting you to provide

information

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about your hotel Radisson which is located at Queen Street in Sydney. Sir,I am planning to visit Australia in the coming month with my friends so we need to stay in a hotel for a few weeks.I want to gather some

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about the availability of the rooms as we are coming for a business trip so we need at least four bedrooms with proper wi-fi network.

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,we need some plugs so that we can attach our laptops and conduct our meetings.I want to enquire about the food and

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whether breakfast and dinner are included or not. Since we are coming for the very first time so we want to explore Sydney so it would be great if you provide me with some

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about organising day trips for my colleagues.

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,I would be certainly grateful if you can send me a brochure at my address.For

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information

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,you can contact me at any time and if everything will be perfect,I will book the accommodation in advance and pay online. Hope to get a positive response from your side. Yours sincerely, Kiran

kiranbaidwan064Sat Jun 24 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

192 words

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