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Some people say it is the government responsibility to transport children to school. Others believe parents should transport their children to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Morning routines are very hectic for every person,
that
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 they do not even get
a
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 hour for breakfast. At
this
 stage, a certain community believes that Government should provide
services
 to carry their children to
school
. some modernists prefer to drop their offspring at learning institutions. I believe it is essential for the ruling authorities to provide
services
 for children to travel to
school
 because
this
 will help to minimise traffic
jams
 and parents will
also
 get
moment
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 to maintain their routine. To commence with, traffic
jams
 and pollution is the major problem of
this
 decade. It is the government's responsibility to start special bus
services
 to carry offspring to schools.
Moreover
, there are millions of students who are driving daily to learning institutions, and if each parent will travel from their own vehicle
then
 pollution and traffic
jams
 will significantly increase. In a country like India and
China
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 average population is around 2.5 billion, and the governments have started some
services
 for infants to transport them to
school
.
However
, it is an undeniable fact that in
this
 era corporate workload pressure is very high. Parents hardly get time to spend with their upbringings. If they will travel with their children in the morning to
school
, they will get some time to talk to them, about what is happening in their life, how their studies are going on and even play some games. As a matter of fact,
this
 small initiative will help to build a strong friendship with them. In a nutshell, every aspect has its pros and cons.
Although
 parent's relationship will become more strong if they will daily drop their infants at
school
 because they will get some time to know about each other, I believe it is even more important that the government should provide these
services
 to reduce the hectic
jams
 on the road
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as a result
this
 will
also
 help in reducing global warming.
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