The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
The graph and table illustrate detailed information about the volunteer
work
at home
done by male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
. Fix the agreement mistake
females
Overall
, the graph shows that woman
spend more Fix the agreement mistake
women
hours
working on household job
compare to Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
men
, similarly
the table describes how woman
are more proficient in taking care of the house and Fix the agreement mistake
women
children
.
Looking at the hours
spent by female
, mothers with Fix the agreement mistake
females
children
spent much more amount of time in
working at Change preposition
apply
home
, around 50 to nearly 60 hours
every week. Meanwhile, women
without children
work
only around 30 hours
every week. However
, the number of hours
spent by men
with or without children
remain
constant, Correct subject-verb agreement
remains
under
20 Change preposition
with under
hours
of
spent on household Change preposition
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work
.
Moving on to the type of work
female
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females
doing
at Wrong verb form
do
home
, women
are better in
dealing with housework Change preposition
at
such
as cleaning, cooking, and taking care of the children
. Women
share 25% to
either clean the entire house Change preposition
apply
and
cooking, Correct word choice
or
while
men
only share 20% on
the same Change preposition
of
works
. Fix the agreement mistake
work
Moreover
, the proportion of looking after the
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apply
children
is 35% for women
, which is 20% higher than the men
. Since women
mainly focus on the household job, men
proved to be very handy in gardening or mechanical work
. Men
do 20% on
gardening, Change preposition
of
while
women
only 10
%. Add a missing verb
do 10
Additionally
, most men
spend around 30% of their time to fix
cars, furniture, and Change the verb form
fixing
the
electronic devices at Correct article usage
apply
home
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work, home, hours, men, children, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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