Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to enquire about

a forgotten baggage

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on my recent flight from Berlin to London on 17th June. I had a hectic schedule that afternoon and

unfortunately

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I left behind my

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on flight YVR123 on seat F6 in an attempt to leave quickly. I was wondering what was your airline's process for abandoned bags

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flights. Can you please provide me

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details of where can travellers identify and claim their baggage

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The contents of my

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are 20 US Dollars and 70 Pounds worth of cash, 3 pens, a notebook with a yellow covering around it and a casing for my

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. The items are not really expensive,

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, the notebook means a lot to me as I journal events of my life in it. I would be grateful if you can help identify the

bag

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and contact me with the process of collecting

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bag

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. I request you to expedite

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process as I will leave London on June

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23rd. Alternatively, if your company would like to mail

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the

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to my residence in Berlin, I am ready to bear the shipping expenses.Looking forward

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your response regarding

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case. Sincerely, Tom

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

206 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Unfortunate incident
Flight details
Distraction
Valuable possessions
Sentimental value
Lost and found procedure
Safe return
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Gratitude
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