The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the information of a police station in Britain

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the budget and expenses in the

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2017 and 2018 respectively. On the one hand, the total budget of 2018 just had a slight increase to 2017, which is only 13.9 million more precisely.

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, the table shows that the National Government attributed the highest amount among the source of budget,

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the other sources, e.g. grants, dominated the smallest figure of income.

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, the local taxes raised more than 10 million, which is the highest raise compared to other sources of the fund.

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we can know, how

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spent, which can mainly be divided into 3 parts, that are salaries, technology, and buildings and transport. The salaries of the police

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have the maximum share of total expenditure, which is 75% in 2017 and 69% in 2018.

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the technology has approximately doubled in 2018 than 2017,

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, the building and transportation

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the same. In conclusion, even though there is a mild difference between the two years, we can still see some fluctuations between them, and we can assume that, with

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of technology, which leads

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less cost

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salaries.