You left a bag in the cinema of this city that you were visiting. You want to recover the bank. Write a letter to the cinema manager. In your letter give detail of your visit. Describe the bag and its content. Explain what you want the manager to do

Dear Sir, I am Kiran, a permanent resident of Brampton,Ontario.I am working as an Accountant at Scotiabank.I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I forgot my
bag
at your cinema
last
week. Sir,I visited the Silvercity cinema with my friends
last
week and during the intermission when I went to grab some snacks and drinks at the cafeteria I realised that I lost my purse .After coming back from the coffee area,I searched for every single seat but I could not find it.Basically,It is a
black coloured
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Zara
bag
with two zips and one Doremon keychain.
In addition
to that,I have all my credit and debit cards in my
bag
. I talked to the staff member and he helped me to search for it ,unfortunately,he was unable to find it.I want you to check the cameras so that I can get back my
bag
as it contains all the important documents.I would be very grateful if you would help me. Hope to get a positive response from your side. Yours sincerely, Kiran
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