A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: explain the arrangements you have made for him/her to get keys tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house say when you will be home and suggest what you could do together that evening Write at least 150 words.

Dear Jamie, I'm so happy that my lovely cousin is joining my place

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summer. you're brave to take the train for

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a long distance. The thing is, I won'

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be able to meet you at the station, but don'

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worry, I have made all things easy for you to do a self-check-in at my house. When you reach the front door, you'

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see a red smart lock that'

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be unlocked by a 4 digits number. The passcode is my birthday. As for directions to reach my house, it's easy. Just exit the underground station by the south gate and walk up the stairs

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walk straight for about 150 m. You'

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reach an intersection, take a right, and another right at the first street. Walk for about 35m. My unit is on your right, a beautiful grey-painted bungalow. I'

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be home at 6 pm so don'

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fall asleep! Wait for me. I'

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take you to a near mall near my. The one that I always talked to you about. It has a nice restaurant. We'

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have dinner there.

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, at 9

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night there's a new movie coming out it'

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be displayed in the cinema in the same mall. we won'

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miss that for sure. Looking forward to spending an amazing summer with my lovely Jamie. Best regards, John

muhammedalkawaz

Jun 24, 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

221 words

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